Monday, December 17, 2012
Friday, December 14, 2012
Wednesday, December 12, 2012
Exercise 3 Complete: All parts=Extra Credit
Exercise 3 Part 1: Preparation Phase--Selecting Location
My location is Franklin Lake in West Long Branch.
Exercise 3 Part 2: Descriptive Exercise
Descriptive Exercise
Exercise 3 Part 3: Converting my descriptive scene to a film format script.
My location is Franklin Lake in West Long Branch.
Exercise 3 Part 2: Descriptive Exercise
Descriptive Exercise
Exercise 3 Part 3: Converting my descriptive scene to a film format script.
"CREEPER IN THE PARK"
By
Benjamin Filiberto Moreno Novoa
FADE IN:
FULL SHOT/EWS-FRANKLIN LAKE PARK-LONG BRANCH-DAY
It is a warm sunday afternoon, with the park slightly full of pedestrians, there is a slow pace as the park dwellers go about thier business of the day.
PAN SHOT- PEDESTRIANS THE PARK LANDSCAPE
MED. SHOT- KEN
He is a young man in his mid twenties, short, lean, with light brown hair blowing in the wind. He is jogging along with a glistening smile on face and headphones blaring. He is purposeful in his steps, sweating heavily, and breathing systematically.
CU- KEN
His face suddenly shifts from a smile to complete confusion. he has stopped running now and appears to making sense of what is goin on off the distance ahead.
OSS-KEN
we get a glimps of what is catching the handsome young man's attention, but with little clarity. It appears to be a man of medium build and height off in the distance. He runs from one set of female joggers to the next, causing them to scream for an unknown reason.
OSS-PAN
the camera pans from left to right still remaining with Ken's point of view. The man cuts from screen left over Ken's left shoulder to screen right (past the back of Ken's head) to over Ken's left shoulder.
CU-KEN
Ken's face goes from confusion to understanding. The man is attacking the female pedestrians of Franklin Lake.
WS-KEN
He begins to run towards the action, attempting to take matters into his own hands.
WS-CREEPER (NO TRUE NAME)
We now the get our first clear view of the "creeper" causing all the chaos. He is of a darker complection, not black but closer to being of middle eastern descent. His hair is wild, similar to an afro, but with more curls. He is wearing a large plaid trenchcoat and converse. He is in mid jog looking for his next victim.
TS (TRACKING SHOT)-CREEPER
A full view aming directly at the creeper and he runs towards the camera as the camera keeps pace roughly 2 or 3 yards ahead. The creeper's head is whipping left and right as he runs seeking out his next victim. The camera ceases it tracking as the creeper stops in his tracks
MS-CREEPER
The creeper now looks left and right, then directly ahead. He is the the center of the shot, when suddenly from off frame and to the left Ken tackles the creeper heavily and both men hit the ground below the camera's frame.
WS-KEN AND CREEPER
Both men struggle for a a few moments, and make thier way to thier feet. Ken is now fighting with the creeper and manages to get the creeper in a choke hold from behind with the creepers arm pulled behind him and in front of Ken.
MCU-KEN AND CREEPER
Ken
(with directness)
I got you now bitch!! You're not attacking any more MILF's in my park!!! What the hell were you thinking!?!?
Creeper
(with fear)
I wasn't attacking anyone I swear, I was......
Both men stop the struggling motion, as their eyes simultaneously track down and see make the realization of what has been going on. The creeper has no shirt on underneath the trench coat, and it appears he has no pants or under wear either.
ECU-KEN
His eyes flash open in a huge bug like surprise. He now realizes the man has been exposing himself to the women, that was the source of the screaming.
CU-KEN
Ken
You sick bastard. really? really? You should be ashamed...for what you've done and for what your working with.
Creeper
(with a total look of shame)
I'm sick I know, but seriously....
Ken
Shut the hell up!! The freak don't get to talk!!
WS-KEN AND CREEPER
Ken clips (kicks) the mans leg out from under him and the creeper hits the ground belly down.
with Ken holding him down from behind.
MCU-CREEPER AND BEN
we now face the creeper who's face is in the foreground and Ken is over his right shoulder in the midground.
Ken
You are now under citizens arrest "Peeee Weee", you have the right to kiss my pale white ass, go to prison and have a dude named BUBBA take your manhood.
Creeper
uh-uh-uhaaaaaaah (begins to sob slowly)
Ken then whips out his cell phone with his free arm, places the phones face directly in front of the creeper, almost to taunt him while he dials 911.
Weather Shot-NIGHT AT THE LAKE
WS-KEN AND THE TWO MILFS
we see Ken and the two unnamed milfs (much taller than Ken) walking away from the camera with Ken in the center. His left arm around the waist of one, his right around the waist of the other.
Ken
(In a very egotostical manner)
You see when a guy sees two fine bitche....I mean lovely ladies like you are in distress the hero in me comes out. That just how I roll, now lets hit that bar...
his voice slowly lowers until no longer audible
FADE TO BLACK
Exercise 3 part 4
The members in my group are Rachael Sbailo, Larry Nicosia, and myself. We decided to go with a story that takes place on campus. We're calling it Campus Crisis. It will be about Rachael's stalker on campus.
Possible suggestions were made for finding nature, which involved our group finding nature and exposing ourselves to the nature that our lovely kean campus provides. Other possible suggestions that arose was ghetto fabulous. This idea entailed the ghetto rats of kean university in all their ghetto loveliness involved in campus conflict. the final idea was Black Friday from Hell, in which Ben had a scary sexual experience while attempting to find cheap quality items during his black friday from hell.
We later changed our script Campus Crisis, in which is being stalked by the sick looking Larry. He has been terrorizing the lovely young women on campus, his newest victim is Rachael. He exposes himself and the Amazingly powerful Benjamin Novoa takes matters into his own hands, by pulling a citizens arrest. After manhandling Larry Ben is a campus hero
Possible suggestions were made for finding nature, which involved our group finding nature and exposing ourselves to the nature that our lovely kean campus provides. Other possible suggestions that arose was ghetto fabulous. This idea entailed the ghetto rats of kean university in all their ghetto loveliness involved in campus conflict. the final idea was Black Friday from Hell, in which Ben had a scary sexual experience while attempting to find cheap quality items during his black friday from hell.
We later changed our script Campus Crisis, in which is being stalked by the sick looking Larry. He has been terrorizing the lovely young women on campus, his newest victim is Rachael. He exposes himself and the Amazingly powerful Benjamin Novoa takes matters into his own hands, by pulling a citizens arrest. After manhandling Larry Ben is a campus hero
Tuesday, December 11, 2012
Monday, December 10, 2012
Exercise 3 part 4
The members in my group are Rachael Sbailo, Larry Nicosia, and myself. We decided to go with a story that takes place on campus. We're calling it Campus Crisis. It will be about Rachael's stalker on campus.
Possible suggestions were made for finding nature, which involved our group finding nature and exposing ourselves to the nature that our lovely kean campus provides. Other possible suggestions that arose was ghetto fabulous. This idea entailed the ghetto rats of kean university in all their ghetto loveliness involved in campus conflict. the final idea was Black Friday from Hell, in which Ben had a scary sexual experience while attempting to find cheap quality items during his black friday from hell.
We later changed our script Campus Crisis, in which is being stalked by the sick looking Larry. He has been terrorizing the lovely young women on campus, his newest victim is Rachael. He exposes himself and the Amazingly powerful Benjamin Novoa takes matters into his own hands, by pulling a citizens arrest. After manhandling Larry Ben is a campus hero.
Possible suggestions were made for finding nature, which involved our group finding nature and exposing ourselves to the nature that our lovely kean campus provides. Other possible suggestions that arose was ghetto fabulous. This idea entailed the ghetto rats of kean university in all their ghetto loveliness involved in campus conflict. the final idea was Black Friday from Hell, in which Ben had a scary sexual experience while attempting to find cheap quality items during his black friday from hell.
We later changed our script Campus Crisis, in which is being stalked by the sick looking Larry. He has been terrorizing the lovely young women on campus, his newest victim is Rachael. He exposes himself and the Amazingly powerful Benjamin Novoa takes matters into his own hands, by pulling a citizens arrest. After manhandling Larry Ben is a campus hero.
Thursday, November 29, 2012
Exercise 3 Part 3: Converting my descriptive scene to a film format script.
"CREEPER IN THE PARK"
By
Benjamin Filiberto Moreno Novoa
FADE IN:
FULL SHOT/EWS-FRANKLIN LAKE PARK-LONG BRANCH-DAY
It is a warm sunday afternoon, with the park slightly full of pedestrians, there is a slow pace as the park dwellers go about thier business of the day.
PAN SHOT- PEDESTRIANS THE PARK LANDSCAPE
MED. SHOT- KEN
He is a young man in his mid twenties, short, lean, with light brown hair blowing in the wind. He is jogging along with a glistening smile on face and headphones blaring. He is purposeful in his steps, sweating heavily, and breathing systematically.
CU- KEN
His face suddenly shifts from a smile to complete confusion. he has stopped running now and appears to making sense of what is goin on off the distance ahead.
OSS-KEN
we get a glimps of what is catching the handsome young man's attention, but with little clarity. It appears to be a man of medium build and height off in the distance. He runs from one set of female joggers to the next, causing them to scream for an unknown reason.
OSS-PAN
the camera pans from left to right still remaining with Ken's point of view. The man cuts from screen left over Ken's left shoulder to screen right (past the back of Ken's head) to over Ken's left shoulder.
CU-KEN
Ken's face goes from confusion to understanding. The man is attacking the female pedestrians of Franklin Lake.
WS-KEN
He begins to run towards the action, attempting to take matters into his own hands.
WS-CREEPER (NO TRUE NAME)
We now the get our first clear view of the "creeper" causing all the chaos. He is of a darker complection, not black but closer to being of middle eastern descent. His hair is wild, similar to an afro, but with more curls. He is wearing a large plaid trenchcoat and converse. He is in mid jog looking for his next victim.
TS (TRACKING SHOT)-CREEPER
A full view aming directly at the creeper and he runs towards the camera as the camera keeps pace roughly 2 or 3 yards ahead. The creeper's head is whipping left and right as he runs seeking out his next victim. The camera ceases it tracking as the creeper stops in his tracks
MS-CREEPER
The creeper now looks left and right, then directly ahead. He is the the center of the shot, when suddenly from off frame and to the left Ken tackles the creeper heavily and both men hit the ground below the camera's frame.
WS-KEN AND CREEPER
Both men struggle for a a few moments, and make thier way to thier feet. Ken is now fighting with the creeper and manages to get the creeper in a choke hold from behind with the creepers arm pulled behind him and in front of Ken.
MCU-KEN AND CREEPER
Ken
(with directness)
I got you now bitch!! You're not attacking any more MILF's in my park!!! What the hell were you thinking!?!?
Creeper
(with fear)
I wasn't attacking anyone I swear, I was......
Both men stop the struggling motion, as their eyes simultaneously track down and see make the realization of what has been going on. The creeper has no shirt on underneath the trench coat, and it appears he has no pants or under wear either.
ECU-KEN
His eyes flash open in a huge bug like surprise. He now realizes the man has been exposing himself to the women, that was the source of the screaming.
CU-KEN
Ken
You sick bastard. really? really? You should be ashamed...for what you've done and for what your working with.
Creeper
(with a total look of shame)
I'm sick I know, but seriously....
Ken
Shut the hell up!! The freak don't get to talk!!
WS-KEN AND CREEPER
Ken clips (kicks) the mans leg out from under him and the creeper hits the ground belly down.
with Ken holding him down from behind.
MCU-CREEPER AND BEN
we now face the creeper who's face is in the foreground and Ken is over his right shoulder in the midground.
Ken
You are now under citizens arrest "Peeee Weee", you have the right to kiss my pale white ass, go to prison and have a dude named BUBBA take your manhood.
Creeper
uh-uh-uhaaaaaaah (begins to sob slowly)
Ken then whips out his cell phone with his free arm, places the phones face directly in front of the creeper, almost to taunt him while he dials 911.
Weather Shot-NIGHT AT THE LAKE
WS-KEN AND THE TWO MILFS
we see Ken and the two unnamed milfs (much taller than Ken) walking away from the camera with Ken in the center. His left arm around the waist of one, his right around the waist of the other.
Ken
(In a very egotostical manner)
You see when a guy sees two fine bitche....I mean lovely ladies like you are in distress the hero in me comes out. That just how I roll, now lets hit that bar...
his voice slowly lowers until no longer audible
FADE TO BLACK
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